Motivation Media
Yesterday to the P.A.C we watched i show about rebounding and there was stories about people who rebounded from something bad that happened to them.We had it on two huge screens and it was really loud and i got a head ache at the start.
One of the people was Anna Mears she fractured her neck and it almost killed her it happened when she was competing she ran in to the back of someone else’ wheel and she landed really hard and and slamed her head on the ground.When she got out of hosbital she was always training everyday and could only last 2 minutes before her eyes got all blury.In 2008 she competed in the Beijing Olympics and she got a silver medal and she was crying after she won it.
There were two other people I cant remember there names but they kayaked from Australia to New Zealand it took them 3 years to decide if they wanted to do it or not but they were only out at sea for 62 days. About half way there they went into a whirlpool they were paddling as hard as they can to get out of it but they didn’t get anywhere it took all there energy so they had to go in the cabin for a couple of days.When they got to New Zealand there were heaps of people waiting there for them.
October 9th, 2009 at 6:30 pm
Well written Isaac, but maybe a few more fullstops and a few less ‘and’ in the sentences. Did you look for a website about Anna or the kayakers so you can link to them somewhere in your post? That way your readers could find out more information about them.
Also I notice you have had a lot of people leave comments on your blog. Have you been answering any questions they have asked? All you have to do is leave a comment and begin with their name eg @Miss W.
Check with me if unsure and remember I am in the 67 computer lab every Friday lunchtime to help.